Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Showing the Story with Pictures

This semester I am in photography and graphic design classes, so I have been working with lots of pictures. I spend many hours critiquing photos. I even find myself critiquing photos that are not my own, such as the photos used in our university’s newspapers.

My Findings in the March 17th edition of the Daily Illini…

The largest photo on the front page was an Irish folk band. The photo did the five things I recommended a few weeks ago in my blog. The picture had no wasted space. The photographer told a story with action. It was apparent that all three people were playing an instrument at a bar. The picture was interesting and told a story. (A thumbs up.)

The second largest photo was focused on a pole with a flyer. The picture tried to tell the reader about the Mumford House, but I only understood that from the headline, not the picture. If I only looked at the photo I see several people standing behind a pole talking. The cutline for the photo said people were protesting the university’s plan to relocate the house, but this was not portrayed in the photo. Eight people were talking not protesting. (A thumbs down)

A few recommendations I have for the photo:

1. Show us what the Mumford House looks like, not a pole.
2. If the word protest is in the cutline and headline, show people protesting.
3. Get closer and fill the frame. Part of the photo is of the ground which does not help tell the story.

The third and final photo of the page was unimpressive as well. Although the photo took little space, the space was basically wasted. The article headline read, “Airports won’t fly as shelters for homeless, authorities say.” The picture: A man dressed in a business suit carrying his luggage. In the background, two men are sitting in chairs that look like they are waiting for their flights. The cutline says they are homeless. When readers look at the photo, they cannot see homelessness in the photo. The picture has little composition and it looks like my eight year old sister snapped a picture at the airport. (A thumbs down)

A few recommendations I have for the photo:

1. Use a different photo or no photo at all.
2. Get a picture of the homeless, not a businessman.
3. Somehow show the location of the picture is an airport.

Improving the quality of photos can help improve the Daily Illini. Do not get me wrong, I enjoy reading the Daily Illini everyday. In fact, I rely on it to give me campus news each day. However, if the photos were more effective, especially on the front page, more students may be interested in picking up the paper.

Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Figuring Numbers

As a freshman in college, I did not understand why I needed to take to math classes to fulfill my degree requirement. I planned to work with words, not numbers. I, unlike most journalists, like numbers, but I wanted to take as many classes that would assist me with my writing, not math. However, I have found in both Jour 420 and Jour 425 that numbers are important. Many people who read the news have something in common with journalists; they need help understanding numbers too.

According to the Newslab website, a common mistake in news writing is making sure that the numbers add up. Readers actually read stories. When they find that percentages add up to more than 100, they will find it. Because this is impossible in reality, a reader may call the news organization and complain. A simple solution, use a calculator at all times.

Most journalists do not like numbers, but readers do not care. Readers want to easily understand numbers in news stories. Journalists must think and “break-down” their numbers for the reader to understand. For example, instead of saying the crime happened 120 yards from the school, say that the crime happened a football field’s length away. Being able to visualize the difference helps people understand the numbers.

Using too many numbers in one paragraph makes numbers confusing too. This occurs in news writing when journalists do not really understand their material. I found a great example on the News by the Numbers website. One example taken from a published newspaper was, “A 30-year-old Molalla man has been sentenced to 20 years in prison with a 10-year minimum in the death of a 16-month-old boy who died of head injuries three days after the baby was in his care.” Wow! That is a long sentence that contains five different numbers. How many numbers is too many? Several websites say that three numbers in an entire paragraph is the maximum any reader will want to read. Use few numbers, but tell entire story. Sometimes less is actually more.

In a few short minutes I found an abundance of information about journalistic numbers. One thing is true, journalists struggle with them. Journalists who want to be “good with numbers” need to practice.

Here are a few places to get started …

Online Calculators can helpful.
Number Quizzes can make numbers less daunting
Books are even available on this topic like Math Tools for Journalists by Kathleen Woodruff Wickham

Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Catch the Moment

What is the first thing readers do after picking up a newspaper? They look at the pictures, of course. Pictures are much more entertaining to look at than a big block of text. Typically, readers select what block of text to tackle by the intriguing photos the newspaper has provided. So, how do you take “good” photos? Professional photographer Mike Hancock discusses tips he uses in his blog. Once you look at his tips and photos, I think you’ll agree that he knows his photography.

Here is a quick guide to being a successful photographer. I combined information that I have learned through photography lectures, graphic design classes, and the tips page

#1 Fill the frame. Fill the viewfinder with an entire picture and use every space possible. When taking the picture use things like depth of field, focus and correct exposure to improve the photo quality. I come from a small town where we have a weekly paper. It is so aggravating to me to see so much space wasted with a picture that has a tiny subject in the middle with other objects like the ground, other people’s heads, and so forth. Use your space widely to capture your audience.

#2 Be patient. As I am learning in my photography class, pictures take time. Instead of just snapping photos of ourselves at the local establishment, we must be thoughtful of where we will take the photo and how we will capture action. One way to catch action is to look for repeated action. For example, a basketball player will make a drive in a similar way every time. Use this to anticipate and catch the action with a click of your camera’s button.

#3 Create composition. When shooting photos it is not just about what subject you are photographing, but it is also how you take the photo. Make sure to shoot both horizontal and vertical photos. This will help the page designer. In addition, make the light available and your focusing abilities to lead the readers eye to the subject. One example I can think of is using part of a sidewalk to lead the eye to a person who is your subject. Show the reader where to look.

#4 Tell the story. A great photo will contain emotion, activity and/or perspective. One of my professors in the College of Media always says, “Tell the story, do not tell us what the story is about with the photo.” In many cases you want to get readers to understand the story before they even read the caption below.

#5 Remember details and manners. A great picture is the goal of photography, but make sure you capture the details of the story as well. Jot down names and their position. If possible, take pictures of people’s name tags to help identify them later. Also, remember your rights as a photographer. You can take pictures of about anything in public, but remember your manners as well. Be tasteful.

You will see if you check out the tips page that many other suggestions for a high-quality picture are available. Photography shows readers the world, but it also helps “people see without a camera” according to Dorothea Lange, a famous Great Depression photographer.